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I'm about to record a new track this weekend about my sweetie. My first album is finished, and i'm trying to go in a more positive direction this time around for album number 2. Album number 1 was filled with profanity and a lot of shit talking and I wanna do something more uplifting this time around. I wanna open up my heart (god that sounds pretentious), and try to work on some music with little to no profanity- just simply because I felt like I used way too much on the first record. Anyways, here are the working lyrics to the song i'm gonna record in a few days. I'm still tweaking it to flow right, but for whoever is interested, here are the lyrics....And of course, feedback is always both welcome or unwelcome, whichever you all prefer :)

"Touch You"

I feel like we're on some Carpenters ish (beginning Adlib)

I wanna be close to you honey buns Birds appear when you near We've only just begun I never felt this way for no one Wanna show you that love number 9 potion You make me feel special boo I just wanna feel all over you We connect like parts of a jigsaw puzzle Do you right all night n wake up and cuddle Wanna give you the world, do all I can Been looking for you since I don't know when And you're so laid back we gonna make it work I'm so off the bat but I don't harm or hurt It might take a minute but we gonna start rising We're young and smart and we're still striving Let's ride together, and make it so exciting Wanna satisfy you baby love to your liking.

You make me feel a way That I never felt until I loved you I think of you all day And when you're here I wanna touch you

I wanna touch you too Feel your soft skin, smellin so good You don't own me and I don't own you But I cherish you as i'm holdin you Nothing I wanna do more than grow with you And no i'm not always the easiest dude If I wasn't honest wit u you'd know the truth But you stand by me like a girl supposed to I'ma give you all of me because you give me all of you Give me a minute i'll be ballin too Honey Love, we have our pet names But we cute like that, so F what they say Wish you were here as these words I lay About how you make me feel all night and day I don't know what else to say you are a laday And I wanna show you how I feel for you babay.

You make me......

Baby girl, you give me what I need Got my head on my shoulders Got my heart of my sleeve You just gotta let your soul be free And go with the flow as I worship your body A creation perfectly designed Mother Nature and Father Time Whenever we kiss I always feel the sunshine Yeah it's like this, we one of a kind I'm a work in progress but you make me complete I can't wait to see where we'll soon be I'ma do what I gotta do to make you hold on to me Treat you like you're the hottest commodity A woman so beautiful and so godly And I'm so unusual, and i act so oddly But i'ma stick wit you cuz you told me you loved me.

You make me...........

J

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Of course, this is a wind up.....right?

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No Holiday wrote: My first album is finished, and i'm trying to go in a more positive direction this time around for album number 2. Album number 1 was filled with profanity and a lot of shit talking and I wanna do something more uplifting this time around.

J

Dr. Dre said the Exact same thing it didn't sell, so he went back to what he knew,

KEEP IT GANSTA G!!!!!

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"I wanna be close to you honey buns"

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My dick cost a late night fee Your dick got the HIV My dick plays on the double feature screen Your dick went straight to DVD

My dick- bigger than a bridge Your dick look like a little kid's My dick- large like the Chargers, the whole team Your shit look like you fourteen

My dick- locked in a cage, right Your dick suffer from stage fright My dick- so hot, it's stolen Your dick look like Gary Coleman

My dick- pink and big Your dick stinks like shit My dick got a Caesar do, Your dick needs a tweezer, dude

My dick is like super size Your dick look like two fries My dick- more mass than the Earth Your dick- half staff, it needs work

My dick- been there done that Your dick sits there with dunce cap My dick- V.I.P. Your shit needs I.D.

It's time that we let the world know Dude, you gotta let your girl go D.S. is the best in the business P.S. we got dicks like Jesus

It's time that we let the world know Dude, you gotta let your girl go D.S. is the best in the business P.S. we got dicks like Jesus

My dick need no introduction Your dick don't even function My dick served a whole lunch-in Your dick- it look like a munchkin

My dick- size of a pumpkin Your dick look like Macaulay Culkin My dick- good good lovin' Your dick- good for nothin'

My dick bench pressed 350 Your dick couldn't shoplift at Thrifty My dick- pretty damn skimpy Your dick- hungry as a hippie

My dick don't fit down the chimney Your dick is like a kid from the Philippines My dick is like an M16 Your dick- broken vending machine

My dick parts the seas Your dick farts and queefs My dick- rumble in the jungle Your dick got touched by your uncle

My dick goes to yoga Your dick- fruit roll-up My dick- grade-A beef Your dick- Mayday geek

My dick- sick and dangerous Your dick- quick and painless My dick- 'nuff said. Your dick loves Fred

It's time that we let the world know Dude, you gotta let your girl go D.S. is the best in the business P.S. we got dicks like Jesus

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Jeffari-al-Texani wrote: My dick cost a late night fee Your dick got the HIV My dick plays on the double feature screen Your dick went straight to DVD

My dick- bigger than a bridge Your dick look like a little kid's My dick- large like the Chargers, the whole team Your shit look like you fourteen

My dick- locked in a cage, right Your dick suffer from stage fright My dick- so hot, it's stolen Your dick look like Gary Coleman

My dick- pink and big Your dick stinks like shit My dick got a Caesar do, Your dick needs a tweezer, dude

My dick is like super size Your dick look like two fries My dick- more mass than the Earth Your dick- half staff, it needs work

My dick- been there done that Your dick sits there with dunce cap My dick- V.I.P. Your shit needs I.D.

It's time that we let the world know Dude, you gotta let your girl go D.S. is the best in the business P.S. we got dicks like Jesus

It's time that we let the world know Dude, you gotta let your girl go D.S. is the best in the business P.S. we got dicks like Jesus

My dick need no introduction Your dick don't even function My dick served a whole lunch-in Your dick- it look like a munchkin

My dick- size of a pumpkin Your dick look like Macaulay Culkin My dick- good good lovin' Your dick- good for nothin'

My dick bench pressed 350 Your dick couldn't shoplift at Thrifty My dick- pretty damn skimpy Your dick- hungry as a hippie

My dick don't fit down the chimney Your dick is like a kid from the Philippines My dick is like an M16 Your dick- broken vending machine

My dick parts the seas Your dick farts and queefs My dick- rumble in the jungle Your dick got touched by your uncle

My dick goes to yoga Your dick- fruit roll-up My dick- grade-A beef Your dick- Mayday geek

My dick- sick and dangerous Your dick- quick and painless My dick- 'nuff said. Your dick loves Fred

It's time that we let the world know Dude, you gotta let your girl go D.S. is the best in the business P.S. we got dicks like Jesus

That's some dick for a virgin Jeff :nod:

:laugh:

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Well..it's so big no one can handle it...

it's a blessing and a curse at the same time...

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No Holiday wrote: I'm about to record a new track this weekend about my sweetie. My first album is finished, and i'm trying to go in a more positive direction this time around for album number 2. Album number 1 was filled with profanity and a lot of shit talking and I wanna do something more uplifting this time around. I wanna open up my heart (god that sounds pretentious), and try to work on some music with little to no profanity- just simply because I felt like I used way too much on the first record. Anyways, here are the working lyrics to the song i'm gonna record in a few days. I'm still tweaking it to flow right, but for whoever is interested, here are the lyrics....And of course, feedback is always both welcome or unwelcome, whichever you all prefer :)

"Touch You"

I feel like we're on some Carpenters ish (beginning Adlib)

I wanna be close to you honey buns Birds appear when you near We've only just begun I never felt this way for no one Wanna show you that love number 9 potion You make me feel special boo I just wanna feel all over you We connect like parts of a jigsaw puzzle Do you right all night n wake up and cuddle Wanna give you the world, do all I can Been looking for you since I don't know when And you're so laid back we gonna make it work I'm so off the bat but I don't harm or hurt It might take a minute but we gonna start rising We're young and smart and we're still striving Let's ride together, and make it so exciting Wanna satisfy you baby love to your liking.

You make me feel a way That I never felt until I loved you I think of you all day And when you're here I wanna touch you

I wanna touch you too Feel your soft skin, smellin so good You don't own me and I don't own you But I cherish you as i'm holdin you Nothing I wanna do more than grow with you And no i'm not always the easiest dude If I wasn't honest wit u you'd know the truth But you stand by me like a girl supposed to I'ma give you all of me because you give me all of you Give me a minute i'll be ballin too Honey Love, we have our pet names But we cute like that, so F what they say Wish you were here as these words I lay About how you make me feel all night and day I don't know what else to say you are a laday And I wanna show you how I feel for you babay.

You make me......

Baby girl, you give me what I need Got my head on my shoulders Got my heart of my sleeve You just gotta let your soul be free And go with the flow as I worship your body A creation perfectly designed Mother Nature and Father Time Whenever we kiss I always feel the sunshine Yeah it's like this, we one of a kind I'm a work in progress but you make me complete I can't wait to see where we'll soon be I'ma do what I gotta do to make you hold on to me Treat you like you're the hottest commodity A woman so beautiful and so godly And I'm so unusual, and i act so oddly But i'ma stick wit you cuz you told me you loved me.

You make me...........

J

Well done mate, the best 'piss take' on here for ages. I find myself being drawn to certain lines and then falling about in fits of laughter. Made my fucking day,thanks mate.

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Jeffari-al-Texani wrote: My dick cost a late night fee Your dick got the HIV My dick plays on the double feature screen Your dick went straight to DVD

My dick- bigger than a bridge Your dick look like a little kid's My dick- large like the Chargers, the whole team Your shit look like you fourteen

My dick- locked in a cage, right Your dick suffer from stage fright My dick- so hot, it's stolen Your dick look like Gary Coleman

My dick- pink and big Your dick stinks like shit My dick got a Caesar do, Your dick needs a tweezer, dude

My dick is like super size Your dick look like two fries My dick- more mass than the Earth Your dick- half staff, it needs work

My dick- been there done that Your dick sits there with dunce cap My dick- V.I.P. Your shit needs I.D.

It's time that we let the world know Dude, you gotta let your girl go D.S. is the best in the business P.S. we got dicks like Jesus

It's time that we let the world know Dude, you gotta let your girl go D.S. is the best in the business P.S. we got dicks like Jesus

My dick need no introduction Your dick don't even function My dick served a whole lunch-in Your dick- it look like a munchkin

My dick- size of a pumpkin Your dick look like Macaulay Culkin My dick- good good lovin' Your dick- good for nothin'

My dick bench pressed 350 Your dick couldn't shoplift at Thrifty My dick- pretty damn skimpy Your dick- hungry as a hippie

My dick don't fit down the chimney Your dick is like a kid from the Philippines My dick is like an M16 Your dick- broken vending machine

My dick parts the seas Your dick farts and queefs My dick- rumble in the jungle Your dick got touched by your uncle

My dick goes to yoga Your dick- fruit roll-up My dick- grade-A beef Your dick- Mayday geek

My dick- sick and dangerous Your dick- quick and painless My dick- 'nuff said. Your dick loves Fred

It's time that we let the world know Dude, you gotta let your girl go D.S. is the best in the business P.S. we got dicks like Jesus

Sounds like rap distilled into a concentrated form, as most of it appears to about the rapper yelling about how big a cock he is...sorry, has.

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Doctor? wrote:

Sounds like rap distilled into a concentrated form, as most of it appears to about the rapper yelling about how big a cock he is...sorry, has.

I believe you nailed it with the bolded part...

I also believe that the person that posted that might be a cock as well...I'll have to leave that up to the rest of y'all...

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I'm convinced this guy ain't for real

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No Holiday wrote: I just wanna feel all over you

In the alley or at Starbucks???

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Jeffari-al-Texani wrote:

No Holiday wrote: I just wanna feel all over you

In the alley or at Starbucks???

Wherever it is, he's no Peter North...

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sums up love letters/songs in this day and age:

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No Holiday wrote:

Got my heart of my sleeve

So your heart is made of cloth???

fuck me, this is good stuff!!!

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threats of redundancy pensions gone to rat shit and then this

the world seems good again

thanks

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Jeffari-al-Texani wrote: My dick cost a late night fee Your dick got the HIV My dick plays on the double feature screen Your dick went straight to DVD

My dick- bigger than a bridge Your dick look like a little kid's My dick- large like the Chargers, the whole team Your shit look like you fourteen

My dick- locked in a cage, right Your dick suffer from stage fright My dick- so hot, it's stolen Your dick look like Gary Coleman

My dick- pink and big Your dick stinks like shit My dick got a Caesar do, Your dick needs a tweezer, dude

My dick is like super size Your dick look like two fries My dick- more mass than the Earth Your dick- half staff, it needs work

My dick- been there done that Your dick sits there with dunce cap My dick- V.I.P. Your shit needs I.D.

It's time that we let the world know Dude, you gotta let your girl go D.S. is the best in the business P.S. we got dicks like Jesus

It's time that we let the world know Dude, you gotta let your girl go D.S. is the best in the business P.S. we got dicks like Jesus

My dick need no introduction Your dick don't even function My dick served a whole lunch-in Your dick- it look like a munchkin

My dick- size of a pumpkin Your dick look like Macaulay Culkin My dick- good good lovin' Your dick- good for nothin'

My dick bench pressed 350 Your dick couldn't shoplift at Thrifty My dick- pretty damn skimpy Your dick- hungry as a hippie

My dick don't fit down the chimney Your dick is like a kid from the Philippines My dick is like an M16 Your dick- broken vending machine

My dick parts the seas Your dick farts and queefs My dick- rumble in the jungle Your dick got touched by your uncle

My dick goes to yoga Your dick- fruit roll-up My dick- grade-A beef Your dick- Mayday geek

My dick- sick and dangerous Your dick- quick and painless My dick- 'nuff said. Your dick loves Fred

It's time that we let the world know Dude, you gotta let your girl go D.S. is the best in the business P.S. we got dicks like Jesus

Even though you're clearly satirizing me and you're a damn Texan, I actually found your little parody rather funny. I might use some your lines for a bonus track or something, just for shits n giggles.....of course if that's alright with you :abovelol:

J

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