OK, let's work it out then. I'm working from the album version, but falling back on their performance at Tolworth, UK on 20 March 1983 when I'm really stuck.
My promise could be your fiend
Change to "My comments could be your theme(s)."
A given end to your dreams
This is pretty close, although it could also be "And give an end to your dream(s)".
A simple movement or rhyme
Could be the smallest of signs
We'll never know what they are or care
No question here.
In it's escapable view
This doesn't sound right. It could very well be "And that's the statement or view" but it sounds like "And then just take a poor view" to my ears. 
There's no escape so few in fear
Close enough.
Give in a changing value
Definitely wrong. This is either "Day made a change in value" or "Debate a change in value".
To be given your sight
OK
Hid in a long peaceful night
This should be "Hid(den) in a warm peaceful night".
A nervous bride for your eyes
Could also be "A nervous cry for your eyes".
A fractured smile that soon dies
Yep.
A love that's wrong from your life and soul
Definitely "A language drawn from your life and soul".
A savage mine had begun
"A sign which might have begun" sounds far closer.
Hello, farewell to your love and soul
Hello, farewell to your soul
This could be correct, but I think it's more likely "A long farewell to your love and so / A long farewell to your soul".
Now I know what those hands would do
Very tough to make out, but the quoted line here is definitely not right. I can hear "Now I know what was meant to do".
No looking back now, we're pushing through
Small change to "No looking back now or pushing through".
We'll change these feelings, we'll taste and see
I'm really not sure. "The change it seems in taste or scene" has been suggested elsewhere.
But never guess how the him would scream
But never guess how the him would scream
But never guess how the him would scream
Again, the lines here are very close. "But never gets loud or he would scream" works a little better.